11 AP Blog

1Hello!! Today, I am going to talk about the things I have learned throughout the year in my english class and also, how I believe I improved as a writer. 1.. " Through F. Scott Fitzgerald's use of language on The Great Gatsby, including the appeal to repetition, pathos, ethos, and imagery, which makes it fair to admit the presence of a covered depressed society behind all the parties and cheerful described people portrayed on his writing and bringing us to think about the idea of happiness compared to the 1920’s." This excerpt was taken from one of my first essays in AP English, I decided to use this due to the fact that I believe it portays my development throughout the course as a writer. I believe that the thesis statement cited above is good but it could have been more specific, this was one of my challenges throughout the year, mantaining the essay balanced between objective and specific. 2. "There is evidence within Oscar Wilde's claim that portrays d